Discussion (9) ¬

1. 
   Benana

   June 23, 2011 at 1:40 am | #

   You’ve placed the speech bubbles all wrong sir
2. 
   fgsfdsg

   June 23, 2011 at 2:55 am | #

   have you ever read a comic? learn how to place speech bubbles before making your own webcomic please
3. 
   zsdlkfm

   June 23, 2011 at 4:12 am | #

   good but your speech bubble placement in panel 2 caused much confusion as the top bubble isn’t the first one
4. 
   Mark

   June 23, 2011 at 4:54 am | #

   Came here from stumbleupon. It took me multiple read throughs to understand this comic. The flow of the speech bubbles is all wrong, and difficult to get through. Unless I’m severely missing something, this is the first comic I’ve come across requiring the reader to read from bottom to top, but top to bottom text wise within the bubbles themselves.
5. 
   Patrick

   June 23, 2011 at 8:06 am | #

   Not the only one, problem reading, it seems webcomic
6. 
   Dr Von Krumpet

   June 23, 2011 at 5:21 pm | #

   I’m sure the other ‘speech bubble’ comments have merit, but I got your drift and had a good laugh at your great comic!
7. 
   Patrick

   June 23, 2011 at 8:02 pm | #

   Thanks!!
8. 
   Anarchist

   June 28, 2011 at 10:30 am | #

   I like your non-conformist bubbles. They are super-asymmetrically logical, flow well and are creative. Thanks for coloring outside the lines!
9. 
   Patrick

   June 28, 2011 at 11:21 am | #

   Hey Thanks for the support. I’m just a guy trying to make his way in the universe.